Katherine Roberts on the eternal fascination of She
I first read this book when I was about 10 or 11, after discovering it on my mum’s secret bookshelf. I’d outgrown pony stories and wanted something a bit more exciting. I was halfway through the story by the time Mum found out I had the book, by which time she was too late to stop me from reading the rest… I was too wrapped up in the fascinating tale of “She Who Must Be Obeyed” and had fallen in love with H Rider Haggard’s rather-too-old-for-me but still heart-throbbingly handsome hero Leo, believed by She to be the reincarnation of her long dead ancient Egyptian lover.
I first read this book when I was about 10 or 11, after discovering it on my mum’s secret bookshelf. I’d outgrown pony stories and wanted something a bit more exciting. I was halfway through the story by the time Mum found out I had the book, by which time she was too late to stop me from reading the rest… I was too wrapped up in the fascinating tale of “She Who Must Be Obeyed” and had fallen in love with H Rider Haggard’s rather-too-old-for-me but still heart-throbbingly handsome hero Leo, believed by She to be the reincarnation of her long dead ancient Egyptian lover.
“It’s a bit of a horror story,” warned my mum. “But a good
adventure, I suppose.”
I’d already worked that out for myself! The golden Leo and
his Uncle Holly, accompanied by their faithful manservant Job, had already left
boring old England for Africa, where they had been shipwrecked, shot big game
(the story was first published in 1887, when these things were less politically
incorrect), been kidnapped by the People Who Place Pots on the Heads of
Strangers, and taken to the lost land of Kôr, where they meet the enigmatically
veiled Queen Ayesha, known to the local tribes only as “She Who Must Be
Obeyed”. Along the way, our hero Leo nearly drowns, is rescued from the jaws of
a giant crocodile, gets eaten alive by mosquitoes, is wounded in a fight, and
gains a tribal wife called Ustane… and that’s only a quarter of the way through
the story!
The early chapters back in England promised even greater
magic, according to a script translated from a shard of an ancient Greek vase:
“Then She did take us, and lead us by terrible ways, by
means of dark magic, to where a great pit is, and showed to us the rolling
Pillar of Life that dies not… and there did She stand in the flames and come
forth unharmed, and yet more beautiful.”
And also it seems, immortal, although her attempt to persuade
her beloved Kallikrates to join her in the fire fails, since he is in love with
another woman. So Ayesha kills him in a fit of passion, after which she is
doomed to live alone for two thousand years until she finds his reincarnation
in the flesh… none other than our young hero, Leo!
How could I not read on?
Ayesha keeps herself veiled because she fears the effect her
beauty might have on the mortal men she rules. She unveils only in private,
when she curses the mortal woman who doomed her to two thousand years of
loneliness:
“Curse her, daughter of the Nile, because of her beauty…
Curse her, because her magic has prevailed against mine…
Curse her, because she held my beloved from me…”
This turns her into a proper storybook villainess, which she
soon demonstrates by sentencing the People Who Place Pots on the Heads of
Strangers to death for attempting to cook and eat Leo and his friends, instead
of bringing them safely to her as she ordered. She also punishes Ustane when
the girl tries to nurse Leo after he falls sick, at first merely scaring the
girl by turning her hair white, but eventually seeing her as a dangerous rival
for his love. Poor Ustane cannot fight Ayesha’s magic and is eventually killed
by her in fit of temper. (I cried at that part, and kept expecting Ustane to
come back to life at some point, but of course this is an adult story so she
didn’t – though I later wrote my own happy ending, where Ustane gets to crawl
into the Pillars of Life and comes back to fall into Leo’s arms!)
Freed from Ustane’s love, Leo is at the mercy of Ayesha,
until the final test when she asks him to step into the fire and join her in
immortality. Leo hesitates, and so Ayesha (thinking to reassure him the flames
will not harm him) steps into the fire for the second time… with horrific
results.
The spectacle of the fabulously beautiful queen turning into
an ancient crone in the space of a few heartbeats must be the “horror” my mum
referred to – as a girl, I shuddered a bit, but did not really have much
sympathy for the cruel Ayesha, who had killed the innocent Ustane. Now I can
see more clearly the tragedy of the ancient queen’s long, loveless life, and
her desire to hold on to her power to the bitter end.
As they journey to the secret cavern that contains the
Pillars of Life, she explains her plan to accompany Holly and Leo back to
England and rule there, brushing aside their objections that England already
has a Queen and its own laws that do not include placing pots on the heads of
strangers and eating them:
“The Law! Canst thou not understand, O Holly, that I am
above the law? Does the wind bend to the mountain, or the mountain to the
wind?”
But like many powerful rulers, she takes this a step too far
and compares herself to the goddess of Kor, called Truth:
“There is no man born of woman who may draw my veil and
live… By Death only can thy veil be drawn, O Truth!”
The truth in Ayesha’s case is a harsh one, as her words turn
out to be prophetic. So the villainess expires in her own fire, and the hero
survives to fight another day. And, like all the best horror stories, with her
last breath Ayesha promises to come again, leaving the way open for the sequels
“The Return of She” and “She and Allan”.
SHE, besides being a bit of a horror story and a good
adventure, is packed full of deeper meanings that can be found in all the best
fantasy. Aged 11, many of them passed over my head – I particularly remember
skipping some of the early chapters, when the men are discussing the origins of
the clues that send them on their quest, impatient to get on with the
adventure! But I’m pretty sure they lodged somewhere in my subconscious, to emerge
many years later in my own stories in the form of quests for immortality, such
as Alexander the Great’s journey to the edge of the known world in search of
the water of life to save his horse, and Rhianna’s quest to bring her father
King Arthur back from the dead with the legendary Grail of Stars. Maybe proving
that the most powerful themes live on in fantasy fiction for all ages, which
makes our genre a lot more adult than many non-fantasy readers believe it to
be.
Many thanks to Katherine Langrish for inspiring me to revisit
this great story! If you haven’t read any of H Rider Haggard’s work yet, then
it’s well worth seeking out SHE as a starting point. And if you’re already a
fan, the H Rider Haggard omnibus edition containing all of his 60 novels and short
stories is now available as an ebook… one of the first downloads on my Kindle!
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Katherine Roberts gained a first class degree in mathematics from Bath University, and
went on to work as a mathematician, computer programmer, racehorse
groom and farm labourer - before her first novel, ‘Song Quest’, won the
Branford Boase Award in 1999. Since then, she has written many works of fantasy and historical fantasy for young readers. 'Grail of Stars', the fourth book of The Pendragon Legacy, a series about Rhianna Pendragon, King Arthur's daughter, will be published by Templar, October 2013. Find out more at Katherine's website, www.katherineroberts.co.uk , visit her blog http://reclusivemuse.blogspot.com
or follow her on Twitter: @AuthorKatherine
Picture credits: All artwork by Michael Embden, from the 1981 edition of “She” published by
Dragon’s Dream. Michael Embden's website is http://www.michaelembden.com