Thursday, 2 June 2011

Exciting Things!

Two exciting things, actually.  The first is the lovely cover of the new book I’ve written. ‘Forsaken’ will be published in November by Franklin Watts EDGE, and is one of a series, commissioned from several different well-known children’s authors (*modest cough*), of quick reads for children aged nine and over – children who are competent readers but might feel daunted by a thick, 350 page novel.

This is as sophisticated a story as I’ve ever written, so I hope some of you adults will like it too.  You can fit a lot into a little room. 

Last week I was thinking about waterspirits – naiads and undines and kelpies – the denizens of fresh water, rivers, lakes and tarns.  But the salt sea has always been the province of mermaids.  And rather as fairies were downgraded to flowery little creatures with butterfly wings and sparkly wands, so mermaids – ever since Disney’s Ariel, perhaps – have gone sparkly too.  Long blonde hair, mirrors and combs: perhaps the accessories don’t help – and don’t get me wrong, I don’t mind this at all, any more than I mind little girls poring over the Flower Fairy books, as my own daughters used to do.  Sweet little mermaids are safe and happy reading for little girls.  But what about older children?

I’m not even going down the route of the siren, the mermaid as death omen, precursor of shipwrecks.  No, where I started from in this little book was the original legend behind Matthew Arnold’s classic poem ‘The Forsaken Merman’.  It’s called ‘Agnete and the Merman’ and I found it in an old book of Scandinavian poetry.  In it, as in Arnold’s poem, a mortal woman marries a Merman and has seven children by him.  One day, as she sits singing under the blue water she ‘hears the clocks of England clang’ and seeks leave to revisit land and go to church once more. 

Once back on shore, however, she refuses to return to the sea.  In Arnold’s poem, which I really love, the Merman and his children call wildly and vainly for their lost wife and mother from the bay, until at last they accept that she will never return.

But children, at midnight,
When soft the winds blow,
When clear falls the moonlight,
When spring-tides are low:
When sweet airs come seaward
From heaths starr’d with broom,
And high rocks throw mildly
On the blanch’d sands a gloom,
Up the still, glistening beaches,
Up the creeks we will hie,
Over beds of bright seaweed
The ebb-tide leaves dry:
We will gaze, from the sand-hills
At the white, sleeping town,
At the church on the hillside –
And then come back down,
Singing, ‘There dwells a loved one,
But cruel is she.
She left lonely for ever
The kings of the sea.

There seems to me a great tragic tension in this poem and in the older ballad – the same tension that is found in the Orkney stories of the selkie wife who leaves her fisherman husband to return to the sea.  (Which is the same story in reverse, and an important element of my book Troll Mill, the second part of West of the Moon). These stories are about an unbridgeable strangeness between husband and wife, perhaps more specifically the terrible strangeness caused by post-natal depression.  They’re about seeing someone – even someone as close to you as your partner – as alien. In the Merman story, and with Andersen’s story of The Little Mermaid, despite the little mermaid’s bargain with the sea-witch – it’s not really the physical fact that the mer-people have tails and the humans have legs that causes the trouble.  It’s the perceived ‘fact’ that mer-people don’t have souls.  This will cause the eventual eternal separation of any mer/human marriage anyway; so no wonder the Merman husband, though he calls so desperately, and even climbs on the gravestones in the churchyard to peep through the church windows, will never win his Margaret back. 

Then I thought, but what if one of the children went after her mother to try and bring her back?  And with that idea, which totally grabbed me, this book just flowed.

And my second Very Exciting Thing is that a new series of  Fairytale Reflections will begin on this blog next Friday, and the opening essay will be from the amazing Terri Windling, author of  'The Wood Wife'  - which won the Mythopoeic Award for Novel of the Year in 1996 - and fantasy editor extraordinaire.

I'm posting a little early this week, as I'm going away for a few days.  Have a good weekend, everyone!


  1. Very exciting news, indeed! Congratulations on the book - I look forward to reading it - your slant on Mermaid tales sounds intriguing. And a new series of Fairytale Reflections! Wonderful. Can't wait.

  2. I went to see the latest Pirates of the Caribbean film this week. There are mermaids in that - beautiful but very savage - and in fact the relationship of the mermaid and the sailor was probably the most gripping element of the story - certainly the most intriguing.

  3. I'm looking forward to your new book and the new reflections. Great news!

  4. How exciting! Such a beautiful poem-must confess I didn't know it. It's a fascinating, terrible, powerful idea isn't it-the mother and wife who leaves.

  5. You kept that one quiet, Kath! Congratulations, and what a fabulous cover - just in time for every little girl's Christmas stocking!

  6. The new book looks lovely--congratulations!

  7. I was very taken with your version of the selkie story in Troll Mill (finished reading it last week), it had such poignancy. This sounds an equally intriguing starting point, and I look forward to reading it.

  8. That sounds wonderful! It's funny how we decided at some point in history that only humans have souls - and that's before we get into which way the unbaptised ones are going. It could equally be a pro-Christian allegory as a story about 'unbrigeable strangeness'.

    I hope the mermaid child got his mum back... oh, all right... I'd better read it.

  9. Ooh, that sounds intriguing! I so enjoyed your Trollogy so I will most definately look forward to this! I always felt selkies and merpeople had some deep primeval yearning to them, the pull of the tide in their blood, and the deep wild power of it too...

  10. Forsaken sounds brilliant.Can't wait to read and loved the first new Fairy Tale reflection! Hurray!

  11. Lovely book cover! And I agree with you that water is a marvelous thing.